People can suggest changes [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gPOydzzyrkou37OVUCkIadlKh9D-vFF6bMUV2GgyrMs/edit?usp=sharing here]]
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People can draft language they think might serve us better by suggesting changes in the Google Doc [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gPOydzzyrkou37OVUCkIadlKh9D-vFF6bMUV2GgyrMs/edit?usp=sharing here]]